All Comments on 'Fertility Temple, Lactating Sister'

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Please keep going

Great story!

Fantastic story and would be so much better to keep going. Do they fuck every day? Does he knock her up? Does he get to fuck the other ladies and maybe his Mom too if she is affected. I would like to read that Bro & Sis stay together because she is now pregnant to him.

do not let it end here ... tell is more about what happens later on ... maybe Dylan and Maria share experiences? ... what happens to Dylan and Rebecca when they eventually get back home? ... Dylan and Mom? ... so many questions need answers :)

where they fuck their parents

A beautifully crafted story.

That was HAWT!

Clearly there is a ton of fun filled potential in this for a Epic Saga!

Thanks for writing!

FDD

I like your style. 5 * Thanks for your time and efforts.

I see a family stay lengthening as they convert to the local religion and becum thoroughly immersed in its sacred practices. I just hope no pregnancies as the world already has enough people :)

More! More! More!

Real hot story. I actually would love a whole lot more.

Getting together with mother and father as well.

As for this, great work. Very well put together.

Great story do you plan to bring the parents into it

every bit of it, nothing better than drinking from milk filled breast while having sex, my wife would go wild, she breastfed the last child until she was 18 months old, sadly her breast went back from a D to a small C

So since this story is about fertility, is the sister preggers now? Seems logical. Maybe we will find out in the next chapter? But for now, Dylan needs to stay with her on the dig site. She will need further assistance with relief. And so will Maria and lots of other native women. But send mom and dad back home. 5*. -dave

Loved this, so different!

Lactating is becoming a fetish of mine, so that was really hot. I hope you allow this to continue...

The temple in Mexico is apparently more powerful than the one in Chile, as told in your story, "Fertility Temple, Impregnating Mom." This temple is so potent, just being near it is enough to make all females lactate and put them into heat. If Rebecca's tongue isn't enough to help the suffering ladies, will Dylan step in to fill the gap (a very needy gap you understand, each and every one!), providing aid and comfort to suffering Maria and the other maidens in urgent distress while sowing some wild oats? Dylan has already shown he's a paragon of brotherhood by full-filling Rebecca's request until her cup runneth over. Surely Dylan will extend himself and prick their delight too -- for the sake of international relief?

What are mom and dad doing? Surely mom who is visiting the site is also experiencing this? Unbeknownst, they are probably making a little sibling even as Rebecca and Dylan connect over solving her dilemma. Are all the archeologists men? I would think others besides nurse Rebecca and the servants are affected.

To anonymous - of course they are going to become pregnant! The magic made them lactate within a day or two of just being near the temple, and it gave them wet, erotic dreams to fuel their desires. Dylan remarked that he'd never come harder or with more semen than he did with his sister. I would think silly things like birth control or even operations to tie tubes or snip testicles are no match for the temple's power! The ancient spirits are no doubt pleased with the songs of praise lifted once again in worship - "Oh, god! Oh, god!" Ensuring their potency, the magical statuary are of course made from the rare mineral fornicadium.

Fun fact - the Aztecs and Maya believed that to ensure the health and vitality of the unborn, the mother and father needed to have daily intercourse until the mother reached seven months. I wonder if Rebecca and Dylan know this? If Dylan helps out Maria and the other ladies, he could be very busy indeed!

Fun and amusing. Very wank-worthy. LOL! 5* Slainté

I don't think I've ever said this before, but I do think this story needs more. The bro and sis have to confront each other after she's returned home from the dig and figure out how they're going to behave then. Was it just the effect of the buried temple, or has something grown between them; or have they learned that the temple just let loose something that had been there all along?

Awesome read so happy she did not become pregnant. Also my opinion but no need for continuation perfect just as is.

Let's see now, Mom has been all around this temple for several days now. Isn't it about time that she visited her daughter for some help on her recent change for her breasts to lactate? Seems like an excellent opportunity for her to stay and research the event with her daughter so that they can ostensibly be published, but with the real purpose being fun, fun, fun while Daddy and his T Bird are away.

Later on, Mom can get pregnant, but since Dad has been fixed the arrow falls to her son, who is expecting not one, but three babies counting his girl back home.

We need a second chapter!

Not normally my Cup of T.... Enjoy the pun

Well done - not a traditional "spank a wank" story - I appreciate that - and am considering additional feedback and my own writing.

That is a testament to you.

Cheers

She's a medical practitioner and couldn't say the word "protrude"? Anyway, fun & flirty story. Well done.

Would love to read more about this family! Keep em Cumming!!

Have you thought about a chapter 2? Maybe bringing in mom and dad after mom begins to also be affected by proximity to the temple? Maybe some of the workmen and labourers can also get involved with the women working at the site? Anyways, it was a great read.

Obviously once was not enough. She needs to be pounded through multiple orgasms until pregnant

Keep writing. You have a talent. Another chapter please.

Would love another chapter, either with how her mother is reacting to the effects,

possibly Dylan returns to his hotel room that he’s sharing with his parents to find them fucking & instead of being embossed by being caught the mother invites her son to join them.

Or several month later where she returns from the dig heavily pregnant.

there so many more ways to walk in this story way to early to leve it with this

An amazing story that needs a follow up or three or four!

Very HOT! Well written. A prize winner.

The interplay between Maria and Rebecca, instead of just moving on to the brother, added a lot to the story. One plot quibble: was it really not possible for Maria and her co-workers to get laid?

Sequels don't appear to be your thing, but I note it is a fertility temple. Could their be a pregnancy in the future?

Like the way it is layed out. Hopefully at least another chapter will follow? Many possibilities to go from there. Great story.

Amazing! Hope a sequel will follow...can think of plenty of ways for that to turn out ;)

Dylan needs to pour his sperm into rebecca and give her a baby. That night they should have a session with their parents

A great little story, loved the scenario and cant wait for another chapter. pr.

Wow, what a great story. You have set it up for chapter 2. Please write the next chapter. Does Rebecca end up fucking her father and her mother. Does her mother start to react the same way the other women that are there do? If so does the mother end up fucking Dylan. Maybe while he is there Dylan helps relieve the sexual frustration of Maria, and some of the other women. The father could help as well. Please write more of this story.

Chapter one set the stage for chapter two.

This is a sensational story... love every aspect of it and all the possibilities.

Big fan of all the suggestions others have indicated... on top of those, I think impregnating mother and daughter would be a fantastic closure... father & daughter & Mother & Son, th rest of the lactating women also...

Rebecca exploring her patients more and in more depth also

that was so nasty an hotyes loved it very nice storie made y cock get a nut an was just a hot storie loved it

Beautiful. Great story

FANTASTIC story in terms of eroticism AND craft! Th exposition and interludes between the steamy scenes are perfectly well-paced, and the build-up to the payoff has just the right amount of tension without getting bogged down in awkwardness. Five stars, thank you so much for this piece!

The only bad thing about this story was when you said "the end". Keep it going!

Please write more!!!

Good job!

5 stars 🌟

Bill S.

Five Stars Great Love Story RW

I personally think brother should have licked & made her pussy squirt her fucking her with his cock

Rebecca

I need to have more

With the parents and all pls and thank you

Five Stars. Excellent story. Deserves a sequel.

I know this story's a few years old, but I hope you'll consider continuing it

I can’t wait to be lactating and have people sucking and drinking my milk

Did it work? or does she keep screwing her brother while their parents go back home without him ;). Did her mother start lactating too?

Did he manage to put a baby in her - I am sure he did

Sequel: Dylan secretly got some part of the altar and bought it back to his hometown 😈

Wendywants2Btaken: if you want to be lactating and have people sucking and drinking your milk, you have to be pregnant first. That's the natural way. This story about the effects of a fertility temple is just fantasy, it doesn't happen in the normal world. And to get pregnant you have to get involved with a man. If you don't have a boyfriend or husband, you can contact me. I'm a horny 32 year old always ready to help desperate ladies.