All Comments on 'Festival of Seasons Ch. 02'

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Client8Client8almost 2 years ago

Two chapters, Incessant teasing of anal, and still no promised ass fucking. I can see why this author let the series die after this one

orodawnorodawnalmost 2 years agoAuthor

RE: Incessant Teasing

Hate to break it to you Client: but if you were looking for a short, one-off story where the femboy lead gets plowed in the first few chapters of a bigger story I have planned, then maybe you're reading the wrong story. It's an erotic love story, so I want to throw in some romantic details on top of the lewd ones, and I want to explore that steadily to build on their relationship before we see anything too big.

BUT! That being said, I'm nowhere NEAR done with this series. Not by a long shot. And I promise if you stick around, you'll eventually get to see Bell's ass fucking. It is coming (pun entirely intended).

In the future, though, you can feel free to read my Author's Note at the beginning. If "anal" is on the list of includes, then you'll see some. Otherwise, expect to mostly see what I mentioned.

Hope to see you back here for more chapters! I'd love to have the chance to make it worth your while~.

MyfantasymindMyfantasymindalmost 2 years ago

I love the story so much, post this part was too good and I really fell in love with the characters. Mainly there is a part that moved me, which was in the scene when they are doing makeup to Bell, it reminded me of when my ex-boyfriend would put lipstick on me and then look at me like I was the most beautiful thing in the world. Thank you for the chapter and for that beautiful memory💖

orodawnorodawnalmost 2 years agoAuthor

RE: Makeup

Aww~! I'm so glad I was able to give you that kind of reaction, fantasy! I hope you have found or will find someone who continues to give you that wonderful feeling of being beautiful to someone special and that they treat you good~. It's something worth cherishing with all your heart~.

I hope to see you back for more chapters too, because I am putting all of my effort into making this a story where both of my characters find their bodies, their hearts, and their souls to be the most beautiful things to each other~. As an erotic love story should be~.

MyfantasymindMyfantasymindalmost 2 years ago

With all taste!! I already followed you to stay tuned for updates!! I have the emotion at 100💖💖. You can see the love and effort you put into the story, it feels natural.

With the other, maybe one day it will be, first you have to separate yourself from the past chains, still thank you for making me smile and boost my confidence✨.

I look forward to the next part with great excitement! (No pude evitar escribir en español, pero es mí idioma, de verdad te quería decir gracias💖 ya lo demás lo dije en inglés, así que solo me resta decir, hasta la próxima aparte✨)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Alright , this is top notch and your plans for the story seem great. But the real question: Are all these ladies gonna run a train on him at some point? And I mean ALL the ladies at the inn

orodawnorodawnalmost 2 years agoAuthor

RE: Train

Good question, Anon~. You'll just have to keep reading and eventually find out~.

SMDBSMDBalmost 2 years ago

come on when is the next chapter dropping i cant wait no more

orodawnorodawnalmost 2 years agoAuthor

RE: Next Chapter

Sorry about the wait, SMDB! I was very busy with a family birthday last weekend. It's in progress, but it will still take a bit to wrap up!

SMDBSMDBalmost 2 years ago

take your time friend.. the story is amazing so far, rushing it would be a shame. that was just horny me talking

SMDBSMDBalmost 2 years ago

hope this story hasn't been forgotten

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When are we to be expecting a new chapter, I feel like I’ve waited ages checking every day to see when it will drop

MyfantasymindMyfantasymindover 1 year ago

It comes out in September and September without fap is completely annulled😩

orodawnorodawnover 1 year agoAuthor

Sorry for the wait, everyone! It was my hope that things would have calmed down after my last family vacation in July. But then suddenly everything went into crisis mode because of some last minute changes to moving plans. I'm now settled into my new place, work is in-progress for the next chapter, and I have every motivation to get it here by mid to late-September!

I appreciate all of your patience!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I don't think I've ever actually wanted to ask for another chapter of an erotica, but you've done just that. The next chapter can't come sooner!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

10/10

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

comeon im dying for the new chapter yo drop😭

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

According to comment below new chapter will be out in 1 hour let's go

orodawnorodawnover 1 year agoAuthor

Story chapter is in pending status everyone! Should be out by the end of the week. If not, I will get you an alternative place to read it!

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