All Comments on 'Few Real Hours with My Online Wife'

Try writing in English, next time

The story is mainly in English, but with a few Hindi words.

It's great.... author deserves a hug nd standing ovation....PSG

Thanks for the compliments. More than me the protagonist of the story so inspired me deserves the hug and standing ovation. I dedicate it to her... She's the one who inspired me to write something after so long... She reignited my passion to write. Hats off to her

Nice job waiting for more ..not just with this story but all your stories

Mostly wife swap.. and no words from the wife of your story ..pls add some sexy word from her mouth..I mean narrate