All Comments on 'Fi Ch. 06: Cocktail Liquor'

Simply horrible writing

1.15 that's all I need to know about this story. 1*

There is a boat waiting to take Fi to tbe sex trade in Somalua. And a barrel of caustic a id for asshole Mike.

DOL

The mentally ill closeted crowd are out in droves today.

Still cant write worth a damned but hey the need to express their deeply repressed desire for cock needs an outlet of some sort.

1 Star

Great pen name, lousy story.

26thNCuck Disapproved

I have to agree with some of the comments about bad writing. There's a lot of unnecessary alitiration, where I tried to give the impression of a slurping sound. Pete gets drunk too soon and too quickly, the pacing of this could be improved.

Since you are cuck focused and get off on it your pen name is appropriate. You don’t have to worry , as a pathetic cuck you don’t need your gonads anyway. You lost your balls a long time ago. Ridiculous

When are you going to continue writing this chapter. I swear I'ts one of my favourites here in Literotica.