All Comments on 'Fiancé Seduced By Roommate Pt. 01'

we both loved it, more please soon

This series is going to be awesome, can't wait for next chapter

Great start, don't worry about it. I love slow burners, and this one has all the right tags

It seems it will be a great story, I like the slow development, would love if this story would have 4 or 5 chapters

I hope you don‘t let us wait for chapter 2 to long

Looking forward to seeing how this pans out

Nicely written. I've found with my stories that sometimes you need to set the stage for the characters and their personalities and not jump headlong into the sex. It personalizes it for the reader and makes it more real for them if they can relate to the individuals.

Looking forward to part 2!

Ryan

Very similar to other stories. Nothing new or exciting here.

Nice intro - will wait for some meat before 'stars'...

Love this slow burn. Can't wait for more

Loved the setup - glad Amanda is a regular looking girl, love that she seems to be chubby, hopefully you describe her body more with big saggy tits and a fat ass :) hopefully because of her background she has never shaved or even trimmed her bush! Can't wait for additional chapters - I'm hoping Dante has a few black friends that eventual meet Amanda:)

Hope it starts kicking up in part 2 can't wait

Never, ever, ever share just set up. It's annoying. 1 star because it's annoying.

So, to be clear, Amanda had no problem sleeping with a guy who she didn't live with, but won't sleep with a guy who she is engaged to and lives with. Part of what makes a successful story is likable characters and relatable situations...minimally an alternate world where the premise is consistent....as it can be in the science fiction genre. This crap has neither.

Brilliant start

you sir are a genius !

“ for instance despite living together as a couple “

great line.. great earnest naïveté ... loved it !

NICE SETOP. I LOOK FORWAD TO THE NEXT INSTALLMENt. SORRY 4 THE CAKPS

I have to laugh when I read some of these comments. One of the most erotic stories I've read had a slow start, and comparatively less sex. The way the story was laid out kept me waiting for the next chapter...hope this is one of those ! Giving this first chapter four stars.