All Comments on 'Fiancé Seduced By Roommate Pt. 02'

another well written story , maybe in part 3 Dante fucks Amanda ?

Very well written. Liking the details you are putting and giving the characters their depth.This will make the seduction way hotter. Keep this pace please and let Dante slowly and surely seduce Amanda. Thumbs up

Crazy hot!

Wow, such a hot and erotic story

I hope they don‘t already fuck in chapter 3. I really love the slow development and it would be great if Dante is slowly seducing her in chapter 3 to get her ready for taking her virginity in chapter 4 or maybe chapter 5

And at the end he will share her with his friend(s) he was talking on the phone

Great that you didn‘t let us wait to long for chapter 2. hopefully chapter 3 is coming as quick as this one

Slow and smooth. Five stars for some great writing ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Slowly but surely seducing her, I love the way you write and I am sure there will be another chapter before he gets his prize, maybe two, keep up the good writing

Hoping Dante is hiding the real him, maybe have another phone call caught on camera that shows another side of him?

very good tension building. I hope you will continue this, you will not rush into anything. A very nice start to the series, keep it up

Gave this a 5 star because I like interacial sex & white wives getting a big black cock resizing. The way I’m reading this, you haven’t even fucked your girl. You’re playing with fire thinking about her getting blacked before you can even sample her goods. Hopefully she is on birth control, even though she’s not sexually active. Can’t wait for next chapter.

Hell yes, great story. Keep it up

I don’t care for the gay male stories but something about a straight white Cuck ending up on his knees is hot to me, especially when the or wife chimes in during the act? I think you could make this boy fall into the trance, either way I’m waiting for chapter 3

Very well written…hope the follow ups come regularly and soon. Thanks much for your efforts.

Man I can't wait for them to start fucking

Simply brilliant. Wonderful,believable,credible pacing.A real joy.

Get them fucking. This is annoying to publish teasing chapters.

Getting good definitely ready for some debauchery haha

Very well written. Teasers are great but hopefully the story moves along

Very nice keep the chapters coming

Nice job, looking forward to the next installment!

Great story

I would love to see my wife in Amanda place. She always wanted to be blacked.

I think you were right to wonder about the format of these short segments, unlike your other fully formed stories. But i think the only issue is they are each a little too short. If you do this format again you might want each to be a little more fully formed. For example, I believe a good first segment would have been these first two parts as one. While this story has been often told, you have your own unique and interesting twists that make it a good story, which quality is consistent with your other writing.

I always dislike the hidden camera plot device, especially when it sees and hears everything. Lazy writing. Sorry, I'm out.