All Comments on 'Fiancee in Wet T-Shirt Competition'

To be erotic there has to be some pinch of reality. This was just nonsense. If he marries her now, he'll be the sissy wimp laughing stock of the town, not to mention the idiot who got STD's from fucking a cheating skank whore slut.

What a load of crap.

Great story and nice to hear about making a slut once started never go back

It's a classic storyline, but well done, and I think you should continue.

Is this fucker nuts there is no way I would marry this fucking whore was this her her plan all along to get rid of him

"For some reason, "

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Why write in 1st person if that's basically the reaction from the 1st person narrator? He's as disconnected from what's happening as a dispassionate 3rd person narrator. He goes along with everything, but you don't provide any reason why.

I'd demand she return the ring back and cancel the wedding

As unrealistic as this story is, for some reason it is still very hot. Good stroking material.

Another cuck and slut story…yawn.

You are capable of better.

Why does everyone feel the need to tell us a story is fiction? Just write the damn story.

5*

Simple as fuck

Unbelievable.

Well, it certainly looks like Chloe now is a confirmed slut, if not a soon-to-be whore. She has already made plans for the next weekend that do not seem to include her husband. She will be the center of attraction t the club and will be again fucked in all her holes as long as she is conscious. She is way past being a monogamous wife, and seems to want all her holes filled as often as she can get, and by any cock that is available. The story will be complicated, as her fiancée is not on board with all of this. I would love to see a next chapter - this one was very hot - but the author will have to navigate a tricky path of pseudo-reality and fantasy to reach an ending that avoids the emotional destruction of the husband and becomes totally depressing. Chloe’s new life as a cock-craving slut and whore is what she wants. Does she want to stay with her husband when there is all that cock out there waiting to get into her? Seems doubtful. Will he accept what she now is? Again, who knows, and I hope the author will enlighten us in a next chapter in this fantasy drama.

Ambul. Thankyou for your comments, I really appreciate them. There is a part 2 to this story which is written from Chloes POV. Then there is a part 3 as well. I hope you can read them and give me feedback. Thankyou

I didn't give this a 5 because of her attitude. If not both of them are on board with the antics, then ultimately this will fail