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All Comments on 'Field of Dreams Ch. 02: A Trip to the Mall'

by sissylie4

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rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 1 year ago
Mystery?

Who the hell is Samantha?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You could do with an editor. It jumps from first person to third person and some of it is really clunky. Otherwise, it's good.

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