All Comments on 'Fifty Shades of Dark Pink'

Well done! Excellent dialogue, quite believable. I loved their parrying back and forth and of course the erotic scenes, too. Hope you're planning a follow up...

Thanks! Not sure if and when I'll have a follow-up; some other things are on the table. Sort of interesting how they reveal their true selves. She's got more gumption (and wit) then she showed before. He's both intrigued and intimidated by the power she demonstrates over him.

Beautifully written, painfully erotic. I loved every steamy second of it. Honestly, I feel like having never read 'Fifty Shades of Grey' might have done me some favors, here, as I'm only familiar with these character names and nothing beyond that. Also ironically, I have a feeling I'm going to be biased toward this rendition, if I ever do get around to it.

Bravo gunhilltrain. Five stars for you, and thank you for sharing.

Thank you. Actually, I've never read any of the books or seen any of the movies. I relied entirely on reviews and other materials about it. My take on this is that she is tired of her intimidated act and he too is tired of watching her doing it. Maybe they'll come out in a better place than they started.