All Comments on 'Figure 8 Ch. 02'

I really like this story even with it's mistakes in spelling and grammar. There's actually a storyline to it unlike a lot of stories on here. Please, please, please write more installments!

thanks anon! happy to know you like it.

apologies for mistakes. i know i have grammatical mistakes and spelling errors splattered randomly whenever i write. i do a basic skim edit for glaring mistakes because most of the time i type with my eyes closed...for adhd purposes to be honest. because otherwise i'd just be watching chopped and doctor who re-runs all day...

if the mistakes ever get so bad its unreadable, please let me know. :)

This is quite the tantalizing tale. What is your inspiration?

It has a lot of promise, but this was almost unreadable, how about instead of just putting it out there because you feel you will lose interest in writing it, write the whole thing, edit or get someone to do it for you, then post it. The grammar, spelling, punctuation errors, missing words in sentences or just the wrong words were all glaringly obvious!

Love it!!

But typos, missing words maddening....

There are volunteer editors to be had thru Lit that could make reading so much more enjoyable..

I will continue reading but hope you've availed yourself of them in following chapters.