All Comments on 'Finding a Lost Puppy Ch. 02'

Very Hot, and an interesting storyline, though the change in perspective from paragraph to paragraph did come off a bit confusing until I came to expect it. Looking forward to seeing where this story takes us.

I have a hard time believing every sub would willingly share especially when given the option not to. Typical.

Having the sub guiding the development of the dom. I suppose some might whine about "topping from the bottom" but I don't see that at all. The only "credibility stretch" I sense is the apparent high proportion of wannabe subs looking for a dom. Still giving it 5* and waiting for the next episode. I also see a greater effort being made to highlight the change in "speakers".