All Comments on 'Finding a Roommate'

Nothing innocent about that message.

5*

Tc

Love it can’t wait for part 2

Good premise.

Good backstory. Good setup.

But the sex, although only setting the stage for what's likely to follow, lacks details.

And it's rushed.

Four stars.

Great start for those two roommates! Please continue

Very nicely written story!!! Part two — I can understand yes or no, but I do hope to see more of your stories!

It will be interesting to see where this goes. More, please.

A believable pace and apparently smoldering passion! Await your follow-up!!!

Damn! I should have read the intro a little better. I hate to read "End of part 1".

Only 4 stars because you left me hanging. 2 pages is not a long story, neither is 4 or 8 if it holds my attention. I'll admit a lot of readers can't read longer stories but that's a problem for them not you. Write your story and tell it the best way you can. You'll get write better stories and at least I will give better scores.

What happened next?

Interesting premise, looking forward to your next chapter

5 stars. So long as it’s not the end. You need to continue this story or have an incomplete romance. That just wouldn’t do for your readers waiting for more.

loved it.

please continue

Nice read!

Pls keep going!

Nicely developed so far. I know it's under romance but I hope Part 2 will file under Erotic Coupling.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

So well written!! Can't wait for part two!

Very good. Please continue.

Good story!

4

Great start, looking forward to see where you go from here. Loved the last paragraph where you dropped that her nipples were pierced! Wonder what other surprises Maddy has.

Good start, please proceed.

You have my interest. Please continue.

really hope you do more with this story!!

Nicely done…look forward to next part

I really like where this is going. Good cliffhanger!

Love it - There better be a part 2! LOL! 5*

A fine exposition. The beginnings of character development. Two lonely-ish people getting attracted to each other without labels.

I've rated this a 5, but that's only by rounding up. I had to deduct a few fractional points for the language defects. It's time you learned the difference between "past" and "passed." You would also benefit from a tutorial on how "lie" and "lay" (and, presumably, "rise" versus "raise") are to be used differently. Not rocket science, and more on the order of craftsmanship than artistry.

Oh I liked this, good writing, it had feeling in it, with good descriptions.

My goodness. I feel I wasted away my youth by not having a lesbian blonde housemate invested in helping me de-stress when I most needed it… the scaffolding attraction, the tension between rivals, the sexual honesty. I already know I am going to love this series.

Superb storytelling.

Great pacing, legitimate thought processes, and hot as hell.

I'm very glad to be staring this series.