All Comments on 'Finding Happiness Ch. 02'

by Xantu

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marlam5marlam5about 13 years ago
It's a great story

This is again a great chapter to an all together fantastic story.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

You're a very gifted writer and I've read almost all of your stories.

Thank you so much of charing your talent with us.

April0647April0647about 13 years ago
After reading many

other stories on Lit it is a relief to return to your excellent writing. Looking forward to more.

Rad'lRad'labout 13 years ago
Very well done -

an interesting story, good plot, good characterizations. I've enjoyed what I've read and am looking forward to more of the same.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Exciting

i just starting reading this story (this is my second chapter) and it's captured me..

i can't wait to read the rest, You're able to keep me on my toes waiting for the next paragraph..

thank you so very much !!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 4 years ago
Building Block

This segment made a good building block for the story and filled in some of the gaps from the 1st segment. A decent, but somewhat understandably simplistic, explanation of BDSM for the uninitiated.

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