by Mr_Owlow
I really enjoyed the story, but the abrupt change from "he" to "she" threw me a little. I was hoping Jaime would experience nylons or pantyhose (no fishnets please).
First of all, a big thank you to everyone for all the positive feedback!
Secondly, I struggled with when/if to switch from he to she but decided that as Jaime starts thinking of herself as a girl, the switch emphasizes this.
Thirdly, I'm working on the fourth chapter but it will take a while before it is finished, so please have patience, more gender-bending goodness will come :D
Fastastically written, i wish i belonged to Kara...WOW, make Jaime wear nylons and a garter belt please, cant wait to see what you have planned for Jaime next? Will it be a whipping, slavedom? Chastity?
Your choice to switch to "her" was perfectly timed.
My Mistress always refers to me in the feminine at home, and when we are chatting between friends, and every time she does the chill it sends up my spine is beyond delicious!
Although I am 6'3" and 275lbs, and built like a linebacker I saw so much of myself in this story.
Absolutely LOVED IT!
I'm getting as addicted to reading every next page of this saga as Jamie is to Kara's attentions. You make it so visual and sensual. I hang on every description. Somehow, you manage to place me there and feel every sensation. I love the gentle yet graphic descriptions of the lovemaking as you expertly guide me over the next curve. Thank you.