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Click here"Let's go to bed, my love. I had a hell of a day," he said softly.
"I know baby, me too."
She smiled at him as she slowly removed his Oxford. He pulled off his sleep shorts, and they crawled into bed utterly exhausted.
- COMMENTS
Demosthenes384bcover 1 year agoI'll have to side with several other commenters, the plot point that she would make out in front of all of Andy's family and friends just isn't believable. I know you can do better, so I'll dock you one for laziness. Likewise, Andy's quick forgiveness, when taken in the context they've only known each other a few weeks, is an example of artistic laziness. 4*
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThe fact that everyone forgave her that same day, after the kiss IN FRONT of everyone was beyond disappointing. There was groundwork for some intense drama which wouldve added so much to this story. All-in-all, just re-affirms that Eden shouldve been the choice.
Sniperkingalmost 2 years agoI think my real problem with this chapter is how quick he was to forgive her. To me, the kind of hurt you feel when someone you love betrays you like that doesn't just go away so easily. It's also the fact that she didn't really have to fight to win him back and earn his forgiveness. I'd like to have read her realizing her mistake and being the one to fix things. Honestly, most of the fallout happens with her asleep and she gets to wake up to him already forgiven her.
Although to be honest the cheating came out of nowhere and didn't really fit the story at all. Maybe a different plotline could have been used to induce drama?
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMaybe this is the best uncertain conclusion to a cinderfella fantasy. It was an entertaining ride for a restored white knight and damsels in distress. Not really realistic as struggle for money was never an obstacle to a better life. Feels incomplete, though...
Oldsofty1961almost 2 years agoHave been patiently waiting for the next chapter . You were posting new ones every two to three weeks even on your several chapter's at one time have you given into some bad criticism and diceded to stop the series . I hope not the last chapter was out there but is recoverable would like to see more soon a fan .
