All Comments on 'Finding Love in Thin Places Pt. 03'

It is a well-told story. I grant you that. The writing is excellent and the theme and sub-themes are lofty and raise the spirit. It is insightful and is a very good narrative in every respect but one. You have committed the Great Sin. You have revealed the Great Secret. Perhaps it would have happened anyway, but after millenia you are the one that did It. The Great Secret is secret no longer. What do you mean, what is it? You know what it is and now your readers know. Now everyone knows. The Great Secret. The one of great mystery and heretofore hidden knowledge. It is the Great Secret: Christians fuck.

I have no idea who you are but you literally made me laugh out loud this morning! Thank you, that's a great comment!!!!

I glanced over your story again this morning and got your message. Thanks for the response. Keep writing. You bring a fresh perspective to the dialog.

Spectacular story! TY!

Thank you! In years of reading Lit, I’ve never felt the impact of this story. I’m 74 and lost my wife to cancer two years ago. I’ve just had a parallel pilgrimage with my family to scatter some of her ashes at her grandmother’s farm in Norway. You’ve touched a deep spot for me. I haven’t had an interest to go back to GB again, but now I’m ready to trace your path through GB. Maybe next year. Thanks again!