by dmallord
5* again from me!
I’m a sucker for likable, interesting, believable characters. That’s the strong suit in this story. The dramatic tension of waiting for her inevitable wolf encounter and its aftermath is soothed by the also-inevitable happy ending. The use of actual place names is a big plus for me, too.
I could have enjoyed another page or two of adventures on the road, hopefully without another wolf encounter. Perhaps the happy ending was a bit rushed, but it got where it was going, and it’s your story to tell as you choose.
I really appreciate your seemingly flawless editing. That shows your respect for your craft and your readers.
As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.