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All Comments on 'Finding Love on the Run Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

While it's a good story, the execution and writing leave a lot to be desired, I had trouble following it in a few places. You really need an editor, spelling, grammar and punctuation changes would be a great help. I rated it 3.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Start

Keep going plz :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Think you could possibly do with a new editor. There are a number of typos, grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.jz

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