All Comments on 'Finding Love Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ugh...

Yes I know I know, you can't knock love but I just can't stand ari and Viv. Kate and meg on the other hand I absolutely adore. Kate is so cute with her consideration. Love them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Agree with below comment

I agree with the below person, can't stand Viv and Ari but mainly because that's not how you treat friends .. There are better ways to do things. That being said, another great story. Written so well that you have your readers loving and hating the characters and that is only achieved by emotionally connecting with them. Love the story (and secretly hope that viv and ari won't be forgiven, not for falling for each other but because of how they went about it. A knowing intention to seduce her best friends girl friend and a girlfriend who lies and cheats).

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
:)

I totally agree with the previous comments. I can't stand Ari and Viv too.

And I think that you should concentrate more on Kate and Meg. Maybe mention Ari and Viv sometimes, but not write like a whole page or more about them. I personally could read about Kate and Meg all day. And I would be very pleased if you focus your next part on the both of them. :)

break213break213over 10 years ago
no

I really can care less about viv and ari I was hopeing to see more of meg which u did just that but I do not care about viv and ari. Bit other then that I loved it

ShesUrDreamShesUrDreamover 10 years ago
Still puzzled

Sheesh! There's still a whole lot of hate out there for Vivian and Ari. Yes, it was pretty shitty of Ari to ditch Kate so quickly... but isn't that possible in real life.

Kate's already come to realize that Ari is better off with Viv. And she's head over heels in love with Meg. They're very cute together.

Can't we all just enjoy a very interesting story? I am!!! You rock Dru Druthers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mmmm, Hot

Viv and Ari are cool together, and so are Kate and Meg. Thanks for writing and sharing, I'm enjoying this story, thanks :-)

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Awesomw !

That was a great installment ! I don't understand why you would want to mad at Viv and Ari , but to me they are a great couple. Remember now , when Ari was in the store and the way the girl spoke to her , she's a sub and Kate wasn't seeing what Viv saw from the start . They just clicked and besides from this story began Kate had the hots for Meg so I say all's fair in love and war. Again Awesome piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

More of kate and meg!! I love theyre relationship and cant wait for them to take it.further..dont keep us waiting for too long

break213break213over 10 years ago
:)

I see you guys point it just. I love meg and Kate story more and yeah happen but they didn't need to go about the getting together. I just want more of Kate and meg

NotYourAverageRomeo24NotYourAverageRomeo24over 10 years ago
L.O.V.E

LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Brilliantly & Beautifully written

I'm addicted to Kate lol

Please keep writing!

curiousonejcuriousonejover 10 years ago
Omg I love

As mush a dislike Vivian ...but I do want to know what happen to her and Ari they make great couple too.... But I love to know more about meg and Kate ... And if meg can really date Kate or chicken out when she tell her folks and leave her cuz of it ... Oh god I hope that doesn't happen :/

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love this series! Kate and Meg's storyline is my favorite, but I'm enjoying Vivian and Ari's line too.

Your characters are very believable and you really get invested in them.

(So invested and believable that I want to see that Brenda woman either disappear, be abandoned and divorced, or skinned)

I hope you keep this going for quite some time to come and I hope the next chapter will come soon.

john1946john1946over 10 years ago
ok

Still the same great job. Looking forward to more

tokyoetparistokyoetparisover 10 years ago
Gotta love the family drama! xD

So kidding aside, in this chapter I was half-expecting a drama in Meg's side of family. Turned out to be on the contrary! (That bitc... I mean Brenda!) hehe.. But I know we'll get there hopefully soon on the next chapter; though, I have no idea how Meg's family is gonna take her revelation. ;)

Here's to hoping we get Kate and Meg's storyline up to speed again on the next episode. I'm a bit biased because honestly, Vivian and Ari's story gives me the slightest interest. hehehe... But I also have to remind myself that they are the reason why Kate and Meg are not blinded anymore, and are now together. So yay! Dru, great chapter as always. Thank you! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Addicted!

I just love it, wudn't it be funny to if Brenda was a little bi-curious hehe, as far is the storyline goes I'm addicted!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i love it!!!

I love meg and kates story line. I wanna know what happens between them so bad! Continue to write please!! Looking forward to it

BugattiTBugattiTover 10 years ago
An addict

Am so addicted to this series, I'm just imaging how Meg's first lezzy sex will be. Waiting for the next part. Good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BRILLANT

Another brilliant chapter. Thank you. One of the signs of a great writer is her/his ability to make the characters believable. When the readership is still arguing and expressing their various opinions in a story this long then the author is truly gifted and can take pride in her work. Has any one considered, that by segueing between Kate and Meg and Viv and Ari, Dru is trying is trying to show different types of lovers ( Lesbian/Straight and Dom/Sub) face similar problems within a relationship and how they deal with the broad spectrum of attitudes from the community affect and reflect us all? I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. ChristieP

Wildcat2013Wildcat2013over 10 years ago
Wow

LOVE Kate.... She is such a love able character and her and Meg are wonderful... I can't wait to read about Kate showing Meg the ropes... I am sooooo gonna live vicariously through them!!!!

Viv and Ari... I still have an issue with how they came to be... But they are very much made for each other. Kate has forgiven them so I am trying. :)

Another wonderful chapter... Hope there are many more to come!!!

PS I hope Brenda gets hit by a TRUCK!!! I would be willing to drive it even. ;)

fanfarefanfareover 10 years ago
old dog, old tricks?

I hope that I am not going to seem offensive or bigoted myself. When I watch ostensibly lesbian porn, the scenes with one of the women using a strap-on just make me giggle. And giving a plastic cock a blowjob just makes me break out laughing.

I remember some years ago, a small dinner party my wife and I had for some of the other board members of the local NOW chapter. At least a couple of the women were lesbians and the other women including my wife were curious but then so was I.

The straight? women were asking the lesbians about some of their sexual methods.

Several of the straight women admitted using vibrators or dildos, one of the lesbian women claimed she would never used a penile substitute. She openly scoffed at the use of strap-ons, she claimed that was only done in porn movies for male droolers.

This had to be between fifteen to twenty years ago, maybe things have changed since then. How the hell would I know?

So, I would be interested if any one would want to respond to my curiosity. Either here in commentaries or email my fanfare account. I'd be more interested in a statistical accounting then any explicit descriptions. Thank you.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
No, I Can't Just Let It Go!

Viv and Ari still disgust me, I can't even read their sex scenes, can't stand seeing them happy! Keep hoping that Ari will knuckle under to her parents, or that Viv had rejected the idea of kids, ANYTHING that would through a monkey wrench into their relationship.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Bahama -

I don't agree that Kate didn't see what Viv saw, just that she was too kind to take advantage of a traumatized girl. If Ari had ever come to Kate and said she needed a stronger hand Kate would have been glad to do it.

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
I LOVE IT!

All i can say to Brenda is Grrrr. The slow burn to Kate and Meg's lovemaking, is torturing ME! (LoL) Kate is so patient.... V and A on the other hand...... sigh!

** GREAT CHAPTER **

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Another Great Chapter

But I refuse to read the parts about Viv and Ari, I just want them to go away - and take Brenda with them!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 7 years ago

The writing style and how the words are woven together to paint a vivid picture and elicit feelings is great. But if I'm honest with myself, I still can't fully get into Vivian and Ari. Yes, it worked out well for the four of them in the end, but Vivian and Ari were foul! Sometimes it's not what you do but how you do it and those two were a shitty mess. That's all I got to say about that along with the fact, I skim past most of the parts that have to do with them. I take my scarf (and hat) off to all the Kate's of the world who endure(d) such pain and betrayal. Yeah yeah, I know, if Kate can get over it so can I. It just takes some of us longer than others, and trust, I do understand the "logic." Well on to part 7.

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