All Comments on 'Finding Mr. Wright Ch. 18-Epilogue'

I really loved this story and the way it progressed. I am a male that wishes he could be she if you notice the name. Can you write about this.

This read not a normal sex story. So many stories just go straight to sex with no emotion . No feeling. Your work on this story, whether real or not, is phenomenal. Thank you.

Really good story. Great mix of the bdsm with interpersonal relationship and a look in the the mind of the Dom and Sub. Thank You for writing it.

In a word .... superb. I am sorry the story has ended but am so pleased to have been there from the very beginning. I have never heard anyone voice how I feel about my role as you so beautifully did in this final chapter. I have always been Mr. A and Elizabeth is my idea of perfection in her role.

Much better written than 50 Shades of Grey, which was a pretty shallow read. Well done

For someone that live the BDSM lifestyle, 50 shades of grey was just something for dumb people.

You writing deserve 5 stars everytime in my opinion.

May it lack a little bit of experience here and there, but seriously it's a good job.

Another league than 50 S.o.G.

Ah, the characterization of the characters was indeed PRO.

Thanks for write this, and I think I'm not the only one hoping you go further, may something else, something new.

A breathtaking work of art.

Wow…

Very well done! Thanks for sharing your insights around the mind game of submission. And the scenario of The Society is a good intention to put out to the universe; we need more Mrs. Oeauxs in the sex-positive, D/s world!

I've been sending the link to friends, it's a fast read with a happy ending – what's not to love?

As for ideas for a next story, you do you, of course, but I prefer role models rather than details about screw ups and losers, especially ones who are violent, myopic, homophobic, and misogynistic. I look for stories I can learn from, I've read enough of the things not to do.

In that vein, and from the woman's perspective, I would love to learn more from a female submissive character who is kept aroused and engaged by their Dom in between scenes. Tasks are time consuming to create, deliver, and collect for a busy Dom. "Watching" a sub manage them in their busy lives could help Doms to understand which tasks are productive and which are a waste of time and effort.

Does your experience allow you to write of the ongoing D/s 24/7 relationship? For those of us in ENM or poly relationships, the idea of M/s or 24/7 is a dream scenario that we may never be able to manifest. My awakening to D/s was through a woman who was getting used 4 to 5 times a day, but she still wanted more, as she was not convinced her husband loved her. (That story is here, should you have any interest: https://casualsexproject.com/stories/friends-with-benefits/so-many-firsts/) I dream often of living a daily life that is peppered with sex, bondage, impact, objectification, degradation, humiliation, and sensory deprivation. Would a story about that life from the viewpoint of the female submissive/slave be something you could write?

Again, well done, and many thanks for the effort to capture it so well!

Superb