by Star124
I like the story but it feels rushed. There's no dialogue between characters to read.
I love the idea of this story and can't wait to find out what happens! I do agree that it does seem rushed and would be better with more dialogue and length. Looking forward to reading your next stories!
Yes, I`m loving this story and waiting for the update, please post soon, thank you,
Lovely story, but as one anonymous said, it feels rushed, and some editing would do it good, too. Still waiting for the next chapter.