All Comments on 'Finding my Luna Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

Cant wait for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Okay

I like the story but it feels rushed. There's no dialogue between characters to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love the idea of this story and can't wait to find out what happens! I do agree that it does seem rushed and would be better with more dialogue and length. Looking forward to reading your next stories!

MbC56MbC56about 3 years ago

I am so ready for the next chapter!

tjdhall2tjdhall2about 3 years ago

Yes, I`m loving this story and waiting for the update, please post soon, thank you,

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

Lovely story, but as one anonymous said, it feels rushed, and some editing would do it good, too. Still waiting for the next chapter.

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