All Comments on 'Finding Time 06'

I read every chapter waiting for the story actually to happen. It never did.

This story has a very unique plot, one I would love to see in a novel. Like the other review, I don't think you gave this story line enough depth. I was left wanting way more.

When I wrote it I had the picture in my mind how he would react and how the people around him would behave, this is what I tried to convey. I've written the story my muse prompted me to write, sorry if its simplicity disappoints.

Beatnic.

I loved the concept of the story, but in my opinion it failed because of poor editing and excessive proselytizing.

Something that attracted me to this story in the first place was the question, "how would society react to the development of an omniscience device?" Or something like that.

I guess we'll never know.

It's a fascinating idea, but you spent far too much time waffling about. In the end, much of the personal interaction between the two leads got tiresome and the sex was nothing more than a distraction from the real story being told.