by JimBob44
Quite the benevolent Cupid is Amos. A deliciously sweet and spicy bit of erotic scenery. Thanks very much.
Quite different from your normal fare. No tear jerker here. And I'm not really fond of BDSM. But as usual, you manage to make everything work. You know, I would truly hate it if you stopped posting here. But if I'm honest, I believe you would be a success commercially. You certainly seem to have the talent. 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
The action was great, but the vocabulary and idiom of the dialogue felt contrived and forced to me.
Four stars.
Wow! Very different from the usual but it shows your strength as an author. I just love your work. Five stars as always! Thanks for sharing your work with us.