All Comments on 'Finer Things Ch. 01'

Love this and will wait in anticipation for more! Very well written!,

Very nice, highly erotic in large part because you built up to what we know would happen in a tantalizing way — the search, just enough background, the dinner, ending in sensual love making with the promise of more. And we gain just enough of a glimpse of your characters — again, tantalizing. 5 stars easily.

Cool, elegant and well-written. Strange how in this case, the fact we know Myra is a sugar mom/client from the beginning makes it more exciting, not less.

Very erotic.

Pathetic nonsense

A good start.

Very good start to quite an erotic premise. Really enjoyed the level of detail you put into building up the two characters. Be very interested to see where this goes from here. Hope you have future chapters planned.

Loved it... Hope there is another part to this story

Having some sort of seduction or sexual tension going on would add a lot to this story. And those things are the most exciting parts of a new relationship. Without that, I'm just not feeling enough attraction between the two of them. Unfortunately, it's just a business transaction, without even any haggling or negotiation.

Ooooooo I’m loving this one! I always wanted a sugar momma!