All Comments on 'Fiona'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
crap

this "story" is crap. it is a turd, and I want to flush. try again. wasn't even long enough for me to get hard. not that I would since it was so poorly written. Also, if the both have the same mother, they would be half siblings not step siblings.

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgiralmost 6 years ago

"My penis head is normal... but the shaft of my penis is enormous. Shaped like an elongated football when erect........"

Fuckin' stop writing such stupid shit.

Gawd. I swear, this site is, and has been, inundated with childish writing lately.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Actually, I thought it was cute

You guys need to get over yourselves. Let's see your writing.

The story is short, but has an interesting premise, and has possibilities.

Good first submission. Keep writing...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Keep writing.

Keep writing.

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 6 years ago
I liked it

And I would like to read more of this adventure into incest. It is different to other stories and that is a good thing to me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I didn't HATE it.

I didn't hate it entirely. But sometimes, when school is out, you can tell by reading a couple of stories here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
royal lust

Nussin kuningatarsiskon pillua salaisessa kamarissa. Tämä on fiktiota.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
"There was many men..."

And that's where I gave up.

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