All Comments on 'Fiona's Gangbang Fundraiser'

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One of my earlier girlfriend's sorority initiation involved the pledges to be in a circle, facing inward with their bare asses outward, each with a number on her ass. Guys came up behind them and got to do a few strokes into each pussy (no anal), then moved around to put some strokes in the next one. A dollar a stroke, which went to the sorority's building fund, not to the girls. About 12 girls, about 30 guys. The numbers were for voting for tightest pussy, cutest ass, etc.

Fun story. Well written descriptive without becoming crass. Tantric sex sounds interesting. I’ll have to check it out.

This is one of the sweetest gangbang stories I've ever read. Good going.

In agreement with the other commentor that the buildup to the gangbang felt like I was reading a parody. Fiona is understandably reserved about this business venture, which, in real life, I'm not sure would be legal. But mention money and charity and her inhibitions drop like wet panties. I was smiling big before page 3.

But as usual, there is a genuine sense of realness in your characters that other stories lack. Not to mention the sex was incredibly hot and descriptive, even if the scene was a bit short. Good stuff. I'm enjoying your archive.

Fun story. Can I sign up?

I have been a member of this site since I was 18. At 32, this is by far a top 10 best story I have read on here. The build up was great and the description of Fiona's awakening actually had me feeling it. I look forward to reading more from this author and hope there are more chapters to this adventure.

You did a wonderful job on this and would love to see more adventurers of Fiona and Catherine

Great. Actually I wanted to give the story 4* first, because Fiona is so damn naive and Catherine feels like a pimp.

Stranger: "Miss, wouldn't you go with me to the restrooms so I can fuck the shit out of you?"

Fiona: "What?! No way!"

Stranger: "It's for the charity."

Fiona: "Ok."

But it was so hot then. And the idea is quite original and sexy.

I agree, this story is worthy of more chapters. I'm just too lazy to type on my awkward reading device. I've enjoyed everything I've read from this author.

Great story. Worthy of additional chapters.