All Comments on 'Fiorella'

Good story!

4

A beautiful beginning to a love story. The characters were well developed in limited space, and the dialogue was well done. The plot was interesting leading to another story. The hand job was described with feelings. The ending was about what I expected from the storyline, a pause for the next chapter.

*****Very entertaining read. Different but very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.

Well written

yes . a good effort on all levels ..thanks .

Three problems, each one in an area important to the story.