- Lesbian Sex
- Fire
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Click hereAmber felt something strange then, a twinge deep inside herself, near the core of her being. Her second orgasm hit her even as her body was absorbing the first. Amber screamed then, she had never experienced more than one at a time and she was totally unprepared for the intensity of the feelings.
"That's right slut, cum for mummy," Fire grunted. The words sounded far away to Amber. More of an echo than actual words. She felt as if she were drowning in a sea of red, the waves rising higher and higher to assail her sanity. A third hit her and then a fourth, by then she was lost, mewling and moaning and crying out incoherently. Fire laughed and held Amber's hair tightly, keeping the small blonde's face to the camera as it contorted with each new shock.
Amber became lost in that sea of pleasure, her mind spun away and she lost the ability to distinguish reality. To her reality was the heady waves that smashed into her they were all that were real. She rode them now, no longer fighting but letting them take her where they would. When she came back to herself she was immediately aware of the fact that Fire was still driving the big dildo into her aching pussy. Her Domme had released her hair and was now holding tightly her hips. The strokes were no longer long and even but short and jerky. Amber processed that information slowly but eventually realized that Fire was about to cum. She felt the big woman's tits on her back as Fire fell forward gasping quietly as her orgasm rocked her. For a long time they stayed like that. Amber felt her inner muscles clutching and releasing around the huge dildo. They were both bathed in sweat and breathing heavily. At last Fire stirred and pulled the dildo out. It made and obscene slurping sound that caused Amber to cringe. She was aware of Fire moving behind her and strained to see over her shoulder but she could not. When fire reentered her vision she was no longer wearing the strap on. She moved to the camera and picked it up then walked around Amber slowly. She spent a good deal of time behind her, out of sight. When she walked back she took it off her shoulder. "You have been very good babydoll," she said in her nice voice. Amber smiled weakly at the praise. Fire put the camera down and went about releasing Amber from the bench. When she tried to stand she started to fall but Fire's strong arm wrapped around her tiny waist and held her up. "Are you all right?" Fire asked. "Yes, just having trouble with my legs," Amber slurred. Her tongue felt thick and she was having trouble forming complete thoughts. A powerful aftershock wracked her small frame. Fire picked her up easily and carried her to the bathroom where she took a warm wet cloth and cleaned her up. She quickly showered while Amber sat on the toilet regaining her composure. When Fire emerged from the hot shower she motioned for Amber to get in. Amber showered quickly, the hot water felt good but she was not really able to enjoy it. Her mind was returning to the things she had done and the things that had been done to her. She got out of the shower and meekly allowed her new lover to towel her dry. The big woman went to her dresser and rummages around before tossing a negligee' to Amber. It was big on her but not as big as one of Fire's would have been. Amber wondered whom it belonged to and was surprised to feel a tinge of jealousy. Fire pulled on a blue silk nightgown and turned back the covers. She took Amber's hand and pulled her gently to the bed. Amber snuggled under the cool satin sheets and then felt Fire's arm abound her waist. The big woman pulled her tightly to her body and kissed her cheek. "Sleep little one, tomorrow is a big day for you," she cooed. Amber closed her eyes and snuggled back against the warm body of her Domme and knew no more.
- COMMENTS
FranziskaSissy4 months agoIts a thin line between acceptance and force ….. Ambers needs crossed Fires needs and no ir was not a balanced act ….. Amber was pushed into a position to receive and then using a SAFE word and a dominant ignoring this - then its rape or abuse ….. and yeah BDSM its common such happenings ….. finding the perfect fitting match is it what humans are searching for tainted vanilla or gay or sapphic or s/m doesnt matter
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MarsPatrolalmost 4 years agoI love it. I read your stories years ago but I am coming back around. Wonderful tales. Thank you for sharing.
fran969about 4 years agoI was overwhelmed by your story, so much so that I'm speechless....You have an outstanding imagination...AAAAA+++++
Anonymousover 8 years agoI agree with the othe commentator. This is one story of Colleen's that bothers me. This is rape and abuse, not BDSM.
mambrkeover 8 years agoI'm sorry to find out this great author passed away... I love a lot of her stories.. but not this one.
mambrkeover 8 years agoSuperbly written story, it would be a straight 5 stars if not for one thing – in any sexual relationship „NO“ means „NO“ and in this Sub – Domme relationship the use of safeword means NO. As Amber used the safe word and Fire did not respect that, everything that happened after that was just a violent, obnoxious rape. And all your writers skills can not alter that. I'm simply disgusted, so one star only.
Anonymousover 10 years agoDied in 2006. There's no point in leaving criticism or suggestions.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI just finished reading your story, Fire. It was a pretty great story, but there were some really obvious things wrong with it.
First off, having the character ignore the safe word was really not okay. As much as I did enough it, it's kind of the idea of it that makes me sick.
Also, you need to seriously re-edit this story. Some paragraphs need broken up, you need to use less pronouns (I was seriously confused as to what "she" you were talking about in the scenes with multiple people), and you need to separate the lines of dialogue. At some points, it was really difficult to understand who was talking, and so on.
Anonymousover 11 years agoAwesome story! I can't believe this isn't a series. I'm dying to know what happens next!
fanfareover 11 years agoA neighbor couple introduced my wife and I to the local BDSM club scene. It was interesting but for us, we never went further then mild, vanilla bondage. One of the events that would convince us, this was not to our tastes, would be the severe abuse of a young woman experimenting with her submissive side and seeking a full-time dom.
Unfortunately for her, she fell into the clutches of an abuser. Master Asswipe ignored all safety protocols and her safe word and caused some serious bodily harm. Then he booted her out. The poor girl was so traumatized, she tried to conceal her injuries and treated herself with OTC painkillers.
When she returned to work, her boss noticed that the girl was hurting and barely functioning. This woman was a militant feminist, who had worked with my wife to assist women & children escape abusive relationships. Boss Lady had the experience to recognize that the girl had been the victim of battery. She saw the marks left on the girls wrists, the idiot had used metal handcuffs. The girl's boss forced her to go the Women's Medical Clinic and have her injuries documented and treated.
My wife and I got word to the local BDSM groups about Master Asswipe. Whipsawed Between the Boss Lady and the real doms, the creep was forced to pay a substantial compensation to his victim and his professional life was destroyed.
Someone has to stand up for the victims of mindless cruelty and we did. True, she had consented to being a submissive. She had not consented to being a victim.
Bahamaover 11 years agoThis was great , but I also agree on the safe word being ignored . That makes it rape , not BDSM
idrubloodalmost 12 years agoUntil that bit about the safe word being ignored. I didn’t like the Domme’s actions but it is fiction. Readers please keep that in mind before you all flay CT. We will never know why she went this route with the storyline but her brilliance for story telling cannot be denied.
IDB.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI have to agree with the other comments - the point at which the agreed on safe word was ignored spoiled the story. Up to this point, however, I was already wondering why it was posted under the label of "Lesbian Sex" - for it is, at least in my opinion, more of a BDSM-Story - although a bad one, because of said violation of set rules.
If it was posted under the BDSM - or rather - NC-Label (where I think it belongs to), i would not have read this as I'm not interested in such. Sure, the short description said something about a Gril trying to find her dom, but it would not be the first Story with unexpected twists the writer presents us with.
To summ it up: I'm somewhat disappointed and do think this Story is labeled wrong
