All Comments on 'Fire in the Embers Ch. 04'

Another masterpiece in the works. Your cases are probably as addicting as drugs or alcohol. But in your instance, no harm physical or mental. Well maybe not the mental part. As we all I am sure go a little nuts waiting for the next chapter and case to be posted. Much much better than Perry Mason or NCIS. Keep going please

Thank you,

JFPuck111@att.net

Thanks for acknowledging my comment on "Sister Play". Finally the much awaited action in the final stretch with the consultant

That the sex has actually started to become a distraction from the investigations and the pursuit of the "consultant of crime." :)

Speaking as the author, I agree with you. Sometimes the sexual encounters fit in with the story, but sometimes they feel as if they're an added 'extra', and don't pack the desired sexual 'punch' I originally intended. And yes, sometimes when the plot and action get thick and heavy (as in this series and the next one to come), the sex scenes can actually be a distraction. It's a learning experience for me as i try different things with the writing, so I appreciate everyone who is bearing with me, and i hope everyone continues to enjoy the stories and give good constructive feedback.

WW (and Bowser)---> :o)

Will there be a part 5, if do when will it be released?

Part 5 has been submitted. Sometimes there are glitches and I have to re-submit to get it posted. If it doesn't get published by tomorrow morning, I'll re-submit it.

shit does happen. harsh.

Not building up nicely at all, this one is dynamite. 5⛤

I have not read chapter 5 yet. I foresee at 2 or all three Troy’s Angels being majorly impacted in this next chapter. Cindy may go ballistic with a vendetta against Mr Big for the multiple rapes of Jenna. Cindy knows Jenna is bisexual BUT when she learnes that Gor-Don has been fucking Jenna may drop her after taking care of M r Big. Tanya is going to be devastated when she finds out who Mr Bigis. She has been having sex with him a long time. Theresa may be severely injured in coming raid.

Note to fellow fetish lover. During Todd’s massage of Theresa, you describe him sucking and massaging the balls of her feet. During the mating sex Theresa has on high heels. Love the high heels😀

*****Action packed chapter. Thanks for sharing.