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SirKevinalmost 3 years agoOutstanding story, excellent scene. This was my first story by this author, and I enjoyed the attention to detail.
My one critique is that some of the punctuation is incorrect. Period instead of a comma, that kind of thing. A minor quibble, though. With an editor, this is definitely 5 star material!
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fanficlover2000@fanficlover2000My discord channel: https://discord.gg/xjjuG2Qe 1/2/23 Sorry for the long break between chapters, but dealing with a severe case of writers block, will put up something new this month.
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