All Comments on 'Firecracker'

A bit implausible, but overall, a nice story. Keep working on the storytelling.

-- KK in Texas

This is a pretty nice story. I like how you develop your characters and their motives for their actions. Keep up the good work.

was going to vote you a 5 but votes were gone so i gave you a 100% and you deserved every bit of it. liked your story but in reality fairy/tales never come true like they should - would be nice if they ended up like your story. Thanks ! *JAG

loved the six between the hussy and war vet! great writing. nigel, you are the man!

-C. :)

Gave this one 100% since the voting link was absent. I'd like to read more about Keith and Kammie. The Lake of the Ozarks is a great setting for a May/December relationship. Maybe you could throw in a bit of nude frolicking in some of the coves around the lake. Keep 'em coming!

Wish I could have voted - you'd have got 5*****