All Comments on 'Firecracker'

Wish I could have voted - you'd have got 5*****

Gave this one 100% since the voting link was absent. I'd like to read more about Keith and Kammie. The Lake of the Ozarks is a great setting for a May/December relationship. Maybe you could throw in a bit of nude frolicking in some of the coves around the lake. Keep 'em coming!

loved the six between the hussy and war vet! great writing. nigel, you are the man!

-C. :)

was going to vote you a 5 but votes were gone so i gave you a 100% and you deserved every bit of it. liked your story but in reality fairy/tales never come true like they should - would be nice if they ended up like your story. Thanks ! *JAG

This is a pretty nice story. I like how you develop your characters and their motives for their actions. Keep up the good work.

A bit implausible, but overall, a nice story. Keep working on the storytelling.

-- KK in Texas