by alreadysaidtoomuch
i dont know what they are hoping to get out of this marriage but it sure seems to me like he will sometime be wanting out of it. i dont see how he can get any enjoyment out of it the way she is going about things. they dont seem to talk about things between husband and wife. she is calling the shots here
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! oops, fell asleep reading, did i miss anything interesting?,,,,,thought not.
Sorry, but this has gotten stale. No one cares what happened. She's an unlikeable bitch. He seems clueless. When you make your characters dumb as rocks, your story becomes a rock. It simply wasn't interesting or entertaining. When your story score is less than 2 you know that this was a poorly received effort. Just plain awful.
Found it boring and no love at all. If she really wanted him to accept this lifestyle a little reassurance that he is valued in SOME way other than a pay check would be nice. Not just words but actions too.
Why would Karl put up with such BS? All at once she is dictating where he will sleep, Rex is dictating when he can make love to his own wife....and yet she say's she loves him....what a selfish twit! Please Please, as long as Karl is moving out of the bedroom, let him continue right out of the house...he is better off alone then humiliated by and stuck with such a selfish spouse.....end this crappy relationship and give him some self respect.
No self respecting man would allow this , it's not even a normal fantasy. Divorce would already be started ,he thought it was a one shot deal now he just will take the abuse. I don't think so
OK, can you give a good reason how the wife is in love with her husband? There is no loving here, she just treats him like trash.
and designed to antagonize. Like a racist lunatic, the tale is in all ways over the top and taunting normal folk to an uproar. Well, I for one wont take the bait and am out of this series and author.
One can tell by the number of comments if a story was any good, more so than the numerical score, and the fact this has 10 comments says it all.
YOU POOR PISS ANT OF A SCRIBBLER ARE JUST STEALING OUR TIME AND TRY TO BORE US TO DEATH, ALSO INSULTING US WITH SUCH PUTRID PILE OF SHIT
Wow. A slut wife. Wimpy husband and disrespect all around. So believable to no one
AYTTS? DIVORCE is out of the question No Marriage or immediate Annulment is the only option.
This pen name is the perfect description of this story after the first paragraph.
Well, I read it all. Least liked submission I ever read on this site.
Then again I am the type who told his wife “Get out” when she decided to try on other men.
Great story thank you for sharing, I liked the premise although would have enjoyed even more detail on Karl's thoughts and feelings. It's been so long since you posted I hope your well.