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by EbonCaine

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Clever premise.

But the sex, when it happened, was much too fast. No foreplay of any kind. Just, all of a sudden, pussy envelops cock.

There should have been teasing. Her hand on his cock. Playing with it. Studying his reaction/s. So you like it? Should I touch your balls? Play with them? Are they always so full?

Can you imagine what my mouth would feel like?

Do you like my pussy? (And, by the way, what does it look like? Shaved? Trimmed? Hairy? Would you like to show me how much? Do you like my smell? My taste?

And so on.

Too may details unexplained.

Over too soon.

Four stars for potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Coll ending. Snappy dialogue too

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I keep coming back to this one-----it's just as fresh and hot as each time before.

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Hello there! My name is Ebon Caine, and I am a storyteller. As far back as I can remember, I have been allured by tales of twisted morality and mental domination. As time progressed and I began to find more and more of these fantasies roiling in my mind, I took to writing them...