All Comments on 'First Date'

Welcome to the site and thank you for your first story, which was very competent and well-written, especially for a first submission. I also appreciated your Author's Note; many of the stories published here - and on similar sites - overlap genres to some extent, and it's good to know what to expect. Again, well done - five stars.

Lovely sensual SSC sex and very erotically written too.

I would enjoy this if it became a serial story.

fun and sexy with a good dash of humor - just the way i like them! (stories and people alike)

awesome first submission. please keep it up. i'd love to read more about these guys as well as anything else you may come up with. thank you so much for sharing :)

What an exciting and satisfying first go at writing. Were you an English major? I didn't notice any of the errors I usually find so distracting or maybe it was so erotically stimulating that they never entered my mind. Either way, Bravo! I look forward to your next story! Thank you for sharing.

For a first attempt this was quiet good, not really my normal topic but it was well written and entertaining.

I will watch out for more.

this was light-hearted and seriously sensual. Safe, sane, consensual and soooo sexy.

Wow! Really well written, especially for a first submission. Would love to read more of your work!

You should write more.