All Comments on 'First Kiss with Mom Pt. 05'

When three become one.

Very good. I want to know the answers to his questions too

I LOVE the raw sex of it, your story!

... A Rock Cock rendering for all those young studs out there.

... You are gonna do well on Literocity ! ... Keep up the good work.

And ... I still want to see you work on dialogue.

If you were in a writing group ( worth it's salt ) the group members would be asking you to "DO" the action; not write a report on the action. ... Also, there a couple of spots where you intended one word but typed in ( or, auto correct did ) a different word. Do you know about Beta Readers? ( you are the Alpha Reader; the 'first reader' ) ... Suggest finding a good beta reader: someone knowledgeable and who will be totally honest with their critique.

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You are doing great! ... Keep up the good work!

Oh ... maybe the character ( and YOU ! ) can go to church on Sunday mornings wearing a loose and flowing dress or skirt ... but NO panties! ... Even a thread of cum flowing down the inside of you thighs from an early morning fuck fest !!

Outstanding! This chapter is mind-bogglingly good! Thank you!!

Amazing writing

Thank you so much

Got this guy's motor started for the day. Well done! 5 little gold pointy things. Would love to see more adventures of these three.

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OG46

Love how Mom springs up on to the bed, searching & lusting fir her prey.. first the son, then the daughter….& a “ Squirter” to boot… Very Hot. In the end both she & “ older” sister got what they wanted👍😈

Very hot story. I enjoyed it very much, please, please continue. Love your style, thanks.

You nailed it again my friend, so fucking hot. Yes there were some grammar problems but the store was great! Keep them cumming!

I would love to see this as a movie!!! Great job.

Church Lady ... Check out my ' new' story What Are You Doing To Me ?! ...

... A "church lady" discovers 'new' pleasures -- Sex she had never been exposed to earlier in her life.

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Hope that you are writing more things for us to read.

Take Care, Stay Safe

Levi

Fantastic stories. Thanks

Loved this series but I hope you continue and see where this goes from here gave it 5 stars

Just wonderful. Your work is such a moving, erotic find.

Awesome! Please continue!