All Comments on 'First Light Revisited'

Well worth 5 stars. Loved the build up.

Beautifully written, with a focus on emerging feelings rather than mechanical sex.

That's what Im striving for exploring more of the feelings love rather than the mechanics of sex itself.

The real challenge for me as a writer is to have the feelings of women since I am just a guy with limited experience on the expressing feeling side. Must of my career has been technical writing. I find this most enjoyable and I am happy you enjoy the story more to come...