All Comments on 'First Night'

When the author isn't consistant throughout the story, I usually start doubting. First sentence I see command and am thinking she had invited him to follow. Second sentence: Actually not a command... The story was spot on the rest of the way and especially at the end. This Mistress knows how to be a Mistress in a relationship that she plans to last forever. With her in command, I had no doubts that it would. Well crafted and written. Thanks again to this author. Laura Anne Lynn

More stories like this please. What would this particular genre of BDSM be called? By this genre I mean—no infliction of pain but the complete ownership of a sub where the sub wants to give himself over to his domme completely and typing it all together is the unreadable bond of love. I want a sub just like this.

— Me