All Comments on 'First Night'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More stories like this please. What would this particular genre of BDSM be called? By this genre I mean—no infliction of pain but the complete ownership of a sub where the sub wants to give himself over to his domme completely and typing it all together is the unreadable bond of love. I want a sub just like this.

— Me

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mistress has got it Right

When the author isn't consistant throughout the story, I usually start doubting. First sentence I see command and am thinking she had invited him to follow. Second sentence: Actually not a command... The story was spot on the rest of the way and especially at the end. This Mistress knows how to be a Mistress in a relationship that she plans to last forever. With her in command, I had no doubts that it would. Well crafted and written. Thanks again to this author. Laura Anne Lynn

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