All Comments on 'First Night Seduction Ch. 03'

Apologies - I know there are a couple of errors and one will only be revealed with the next part (yes it goes on!). Thanks for reading, The Author

Too bad my own first time was nothing like this, even though I did have fun (thank you, David!). My advice for Adrian: don't you dare walk away!

Like the title says there are a couple of editing gaffs - one of which will only become obvious when the next parts published!

Very well done. I wish I was Adrien in this story.

Loved your story! I especially liked the part about the anal orgasm. The first time I had one, it was so intense that I grayed out and think I lost consciousness for a second! I was like my whole body was racked with a wonderfully powerful orgasm, felt like all my muscles were spamming and left my cock so sensitive I couldn't touch it for a couple of minutes. I have only had one with a dildo but, if a friend is fucking me, and he lasts long enough, I'll have one every time.