by shadowlily
WOW, great work. I went into my favorite fantasy but at a really well written level.
It was well paced, characters well developed, this was excellent.
Good stuff, thought it was nicely paced and well-written. Ended a little abruptly, but otherwise very hot.
Got my juices flowing.My cunt started dripping. Good job. Needs a 2nd chapter.
Joan @ The Jersey Shore
Sweet... i don't know if I'm allowed to say that this made me cum, but oops... it slipped out :-)