All Comments on 'First Sex with My Younger Brother'

Maybe you should switch to writing in the language you are most familiar with? Tamil perhaps?

Write this in your native language, then go online to find an ap which will translate it into English or get someone to do this for you. The content was good.

You had something , it just got destroyed in the translation(?) If it was google translate don't trust it , it's not good with eastern languages.

Some of the other comments are deservedly complimentary of the story but are, in my opinion, a bit critical of the dialect and language difficulties. I am not sure I agree with the criticisms. I was able to get into the rhythm of the language fairly well after a while, and I thought the language patterns made the story more real and intimate. I have criticized bad grammar in other stories in my comments, but this is pretty much the exception to the rule. I was kind of able to imagine myself sitting at the bar having drinks with a beautiful woman who was telling me this very sexy story in her own dialect. Nice job; keep up the good work.

it is a good story butt needs editing. Take help from the editors here or ask someone you know to do it for you before you up load your next story.

Thank u very much for your valuable feedback 😊.

what the actual fuck

I like the broken English, like "After getting the first fuck of pussy with my brother, I felt lots of cocks from other man."