All Comments on 'First Skinny Dip Becomes Afloat Suck!'

Love the irreverent style and the skill to do it well.

If you are interested, I published three books on Amazon, all erotica, including many with chapters or stories Literotica excludes under its rules.

Your delightful style and ability to hold the narrative with those asides are unique; love the literature references, but the entire experience is quite erotic. Thank you. And I believe I'll check out a book or two!

I got lost about half way through the first page.

I lost interest about 2 paragraphs in.

1 star

DragonRider55

Another excellent story, it reads like a favorite memory!

This one is a couple years old, now, in the writing, and even older than that in the memory. But the memory is evergreen!