All Comments on 'First Skinny Dip Becomes Afloat Suck!'

This one is a couple years old, now, in the writing, and even older than that in the memory. But the memory is evergreen!

Another excellent story, it reads like a favorite memory!

I lost interest about 2 paragraphs in.

1 star

DragonRider55

I got lost about half way through the first page.

Your delightful style and ability to hold the narrative with those asides are unique; love the literature references, but the entire experience is quite erotic. Thank you. And I believe I'll check out a book or two!

If you are interested, I published three books on Amazon, all erotica, including many with chapters or stories Literotica excludes under its rules.

Love the irreverent style and the skill to do it well.