All Comments on 'First Surrender Ch. 03'

This is the BEST I have read in a long, long time!

Can't wait for more!!

Thank you.

ok wheres the 4th one what happens to them? come on girl i neeeeeeed to know

Waiting for the next installment of Darius and Star....

You are easliy one of the best authors I've read on here!!!! Please please please tell more!!!

I love this story ... I keep coming back and rereading it. I also keep hoping that there might be another chapter added. Please write another chapter. I would love to know why he can only offer her one night every so often and I would love to see the conclusion of the story, one where they finally end up making a life together as Master and slave/submissive. I know its been like a year and a half since you wrote anything on this story but I keep coming back hoping for more. Thanks for this story I love it.l