All Comments on 'First Threesome for Aussie Teens'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Proof read

Check the dates. Be consistent .

1993 you were 8 ?!6

RABrownRABrownabout 5 years ago
Editing!,,,,

If Andy went home, who were the three who went to sleep in Jamie's room ?:-(

TeenTopTeenTopabout 5 years ago
Wrong topic

Two boys take turn fucking a third on - not exactly what I would call a threesome.

kafkafabout 5 years ago
Read your stories before posting them

It's full of spelling and grammar mistakes, but more importantly, illogical nonsense. Three people are in a house. One leaves then the three go to bed? Not the only such error.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Yes. Editing errors, BUT a fun, arousing story. Keep writing and telling a good story . . ..

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