by speedodave
Yes. Editing errors, BUT a fun, arousing story. Keep writing and telling a good story . . ..
It's full of spelling and grammar mistakes, but more importantly, illogical nonsense. Three people are in a house. One leaves then the three go to bed? Not the only such error.
Two boys take turn fucking a third on - not exactly what I would call a threesome.
If Andy went home, who were the three who went to sleep in Jamie's room ?:-(