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by CnCAngel

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TigersmanTigersmanalmost 7 years ago
Good story

This is a short but good story. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The meeting

"Hi, nice to meet you. BTW, your wife gave me a blow job. Now, I'm going to fuck her and you can watch. When I fill her with my black cum, you can have a cream pie. I will own her pussy and you never get to touch it again."

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
4...not bad.

Yes, by all means, please introduce your husband to James.

I like the direction this story is going, should you decide to continue it.

One thing this story is missing is dialog with quotation marks.

Sure would make for a 'hotter' read.

Cuck4lifeCuck4lifeover 6 years ago
Awesome

You definitely need to introduce him to your husband! He will love watching you two together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

very good, I enjoyed it a lot, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice Story

I love how you wait until the very end to mention that you are married. Well done with that little plot twist at the end! Please Continue.

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