by KellyRandom
Fantastic story in all aspects!
Scene was set, character developed then advanced, situation introduced, character added. All seamlessly.
Wonderful to find so good anews offering.
"All momentous events are made up of much smaller ones, in a cascade that changes everything." The piece is exquisitely well written. These are feelings I will never feel myself, but you have described them so sensitively that I know what they must have felt like---not so much a transformation as an awakening. This little story has taught me more about what it is to be transgender than anything else I have ever gleaned from the media or from my admittedly limited personal experiences, Thank you for that. You are a terrific writer. More power to you,