All Comments on 'First Time Fling'

by FoxMWonderful

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No bananas

Twenty years old and not called up yet? And, there weren't bananas to be had for any price! The secret to good stories is research. research, research..................

tartan9tartan9about 16 years ago
How about at little praise?

I liked your story,it flowed very well and kept interest. I'm sure as you write more stories your attention to detail will increase, a very good effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Factual Issues

WWII death notifications were always delivered via telegram with one exception. The only time I know of where a military man delivered a WWII death notice was General Geroge Marshall telling his wife her son had been KIA.

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